1.
The girl in the black hooded cloak sprinted down the
narrow, low, metal-walled hallway, followed by two very big, very hungry, very
vicious dogs.
‘Snow!’ she yelled, gasping for breath, ‘Close the
door!’ her words echoed around the tight space. ‘Now!’
‘I’m trying!’ Snow’s voice snapped out of the hooded
girls headset, followed by an exasperated sigh. ‘It keeps shutting me out.’
‘What about the override sequence?’ the girl
suggested, rounding a corner.
‘Don’t you think I’ve tried that?’
‘How many times?’ she replied, nearly stumbling, the
dogs right on her heels.
‘Uh, once…’ Snow said meekly. The hooded girl ran
onwards, silent save her heavy footfalls and breathing. Cold, blind anger was
numbing her thoughts. The closer of the two canines snapped at her feet and she
yelped, surging forwards.
‘If I were you, I would try it again- And I would be
very, very careful to get it right.’ She rounded another corner, her red
sneakers threatening to lose their grip on the smooth concrete floor. She was
coming up to an open door.
‘Quickly.’ As she added this final word, her shoes
finally lost all traction and she fell and rolled through the door. She relaxed
as the doo swung shut with a hiss. She pulled her hood off, revealing her
shoulder length, straight, brown hair. She stood and grimaced at the pair of
dull thuds that were made by the dogs hitting the door and looked around the
room, scouting out the teenage girl sitting at a laptop in a headset that
matched her own. This girl, Snow, turned in her chair and looked at her
partner, fearful. Snow was truly gorgeous, her long black curled hair
complimented her pale skin, and her normal smile could melt the hearts of even
the strictest adults.
‘Red…’ she trailed off.
‘Snow. Don’t start. Just, please, double check from
now on. Okay?’
‘Sure. Yes. Of course.’
‘Okay, how do we get out?’
'Taken care of. Give me a sec.' Snow began packing her
laptop away. 'Did you get it?' she asked. The girl named Red grinned and opened
her fist. A golden pocket watch lay in her palm. She spread her fingers out and
allowed the watch to fall. It jerked to a halt in midair as the chain it hung
from went taught. Snow nodded and slung her laptop bag over her shoulder. She
then walked to the window at the end of the room, opened it and climbed through.
Red followed and blinked in surprise when her feet landed in a puddle. She was
standing in the dark, in the rain.
'This day,' she muttered, pulling her hood back up
again, 'Bites.'
2.
Lance and Ayden Thatcher were born, human, twin
brothers. Dark eyes, brown hair, fair skin. They grew up together, with they're
parents, and the four of them were the final surviving humans of that world.
Everyone else, the friends and family of the Thatchers, were gone. Not
completely, but they had been changed. Lost to either side of that world's war.
When the war started, there had been three sides. The
humans, the lycanthropes and the vampires. But, over time, the numbers of
humans converted to either opposed side of the great battle turned the tables
and very slowly the human's numbers dwindled. The vampires and the
lycanthropes, or lycans, number grew, and the ferocity of battle increased, and
soon it was all the humans could do to stay alive. And now, the four remaining
humans were deep in their slumber, hiding from the supernatural and deadly
beings that owned their once prosperous land waited and hunted for each other.
The Thatcher family had ran from the war when it reached their village, and
they were content to hide and believe that they were alone as a species.
As the boys grew, their physical appearances, and
their personalities grew and changed. Ayden grew tall and broad-shouldered,
always the one to get firewood and do heavy lifting. His hair lightened and his
face was freckled. Lance was of an average height, shorter than his twin, but
not so much that Ayden would be able to tower over him. His hair was black and
limp, always a clump of it drooping across his face. He spent his time
designing and setting traps, to catch rabbits and deer for food.
On the eve of these twins 18th birthday, Ayden was
chopping firewood and Lance was recording the features of a mushroom he'd found
when two creatures tumbled out of the woods and into the little clearing in
which the Thatcher's house was built. There was a roar and one of them stood.
He was a Lycan, and stood at least seven feet tall. He had enormous claws,
which were very sharp. You could tell they were, because when he accidentally
hit a tree trunk, the claw marks were so deep they reached more than halfway
through the trunk. He looked around and saw Ayden and Lance, who were staring
at Lycan and the vampires he had been fighting. The Lycan bounded over, picked
up Ayden and leapt into a tree. Lance screamed as his brother vanished into the
foliage. He whirled to face the vampire, who had also vanished. He spun,
looking for her frantically. She was waiting on the roof of the house, smiling
as he twirled in fear. She jumped down, landing silently behind him and paused,
breathing in the scent of his terror. And then she reached out and gripped his
shoulder and the side of his head, and tilted his neck to the side. As he
gasped in pain, she sunk her fangs into his neck.
Okay, you're decision! Choose wisely!
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ReplyDeleteI agree with Nix, but I think I like the second one a little bit more.
ReplyDeleteI'm enjoying the second one. But both would be nice.
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ReplyDeleteDamnable elves... I can't choose! Both are so good... Ugh. I am neutral on this one. Well done Sparks. You have befuzzled me.
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ReplyDeleteIf not both... 1st
ReplyDeleteMaybe the second one, but I'd like to hear of a story from both, I suppose.
ReplyDeleteFirst because it sounds like someone has been watching Once Upon a Time......
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